It was on a frozen tuesday night that we planned it all out.Noone other than the 6 of us would come to know.The night would give us the shock of our lives, and we were going to experience it.
The hol's were on and our exams were all done.I refer to We in each line to my 5 other friends and myself-Dora,Angre,George,Diance,Bess and Niah(myself).
We were always found together,everywhere,and that's because we were the best of friends.We all loved irritating the world,being a good friend,and sharing all our secrets with one another.I knew i could do nothing without them.
I am writing this story,2 years from the exact date,to be sure,in memory of an experience that i would always love to remember-A night in a haunted house..
I know people reading this story would think-its going to be another stupid horror story,which is going to be like any other one-but i assure you,it is'nt.
I hope everyone reading this will like my story..its the 1st story I am writing and I am only 13.So do'nt mind my mistakes.
Okay let me start.
As i said,it was on a frozen tuesday night that we planned it out.It was freezing outside,and one could see nothing except fog and snow.
It was a good climate according to me,as it would add spice to the plan.
There was a Big(extremely big i must say,)house to the extreme north of our street.Abandoned for several years,inhabited by noone except a few stray dogs who went there for a nap,eerie sounds heard every night,ghostly figures seen were some of the reasons the people called it haunted.Noone dared to even stand a few yards away from the house,as they were scared to the brim.If anyone ever did get inside,there was no hope of getting out.We did'nt feel that ,though.We were brave and loved doing the scariest things ever,and this would be nothing other than one of our INTERESTING experiences.But it did'nt turn out to be the way we expected it to be.
Our School closed on a ,Tuesday so our class planned for a big treat at Welkinbourgh's finest bakery-Trans bakery-we enjoyed over there,partying and playing the best games .
After the event,we all waved goodbye to each other and left on our own ways..except the 6 of us.
We decided to go to the park and sit there for a while.It would be wonderful to wander there in the freezing cold,scary night.
When we went to the park,we found out that there was noone there..it was like a cemetry ,you know,where things were always done silently.
I was'nt scared,nor were my friends.We were walking slowly,talking about the scariest and spookiest things we could do this hol's when Diance interrupted,""Why not spend a night in that haunted house??"
I was shocked at 1st ,but then I came to a conclusion that there was nothing else that would be better than this.
Being the youngest,i told"yeah,thats a good idea..lets leave tomorrow itself.What do you think?"
"H'mm...not at all a bad idea..Yes we will leave tomorrow." said Bess
"But do'nt you think we should take someone elderly with us? For guidance,you know"murmured Angre in a soft voice.Being the eldest,she was the scariest among us.
"ANGRE!!"we all shouted."We are not scared ,okay.And anyways,you are there for a support."said George."i guess so."She replied
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